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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-09 09:09 AM


The wheels dont turn; they mumble
like an external voice of my motor to change

Heaving me over my every mile of spoken word
i push down the pedal thru ones i didnt

So ashamed of what i don't say
what i feel should have been released
of their antique value

No burning rubber, no rubber soul
kiss me through this as i let go of the wheel

I feel the hair tickle my cheek
as i fixate on forgetting and focusing

The itch that drives my door closed
the scartch upon my interior soul.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-09 09:38 AM


The itch that drives my door closed
the scartch upon my interior soul.



Gemma, I like the way you put this!!

You are a very talented writer...I've
probably told you that before, haven't I?
Well, I just told you again   LOL....
Hugs    
Ethel Mae

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-09-2003 09:38 AM).]

AniKay83
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2 posted 2003-06-09 09:45 AM


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So ashamed of what i don't say
what i feel should have been released
of their antique value
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Ok, I got nothing to say, you said it all for me...

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gemjop
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3 posted 2003-06-09 10:12 AM




Ethel Mae, so glad you liked it, thanks 4 your support.

Anikay83, its nice when people can say they feel what ur feeling, makes u feel less alone. thanks 4 reading. xx


passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-09 01:10 PM


very cool gemma, I know this well
Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-06-09 04:05 PM


loved these 2 the most

So ashamed of what i don't say
what i feel should have been released

ah crap i love em all

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