Open Poetry #26 |
Jeanne's War |
Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
it happened in the dead of day the trees stood silent the wind breatheless as always and no one came to save her sleeping amongst the dead to weary to move the bodies the battlefield was now her bed while'st their blood drowned the cities |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very chilling imagery here, appropriate for the subject matter Welcome to Passions, Chris. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Welcome to PIP Chris! amazing entrance if this is the first of what we will see I cannot wait for the next . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I offer a very warm welcome to you, so I might ease the chill of your words. A very enjoyable read. Welcome, welcome. VIVA LA FUNK!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very solemn, vivid write. Welcome to Passions, Chris! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Great imagery in this first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions !! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Chris, this is very chilling imagery in this powerful debut, sweet friend, this feeling is ever too common and I hope soon we can just go about solution-making the easy way, God Bless You Welcome to Passions, sweet Chris, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by all your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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