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Always Lisa
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0 posted 2003-06-08 04:10 PM



I'll Be, by Always Lisa


I'll end with fall and sharp like noble pine
I'll be the storm you hear when there's no rain
I'll be the hugs you give to some with love    
I'll be the touch, the one you can't explain.  
And cry; you'll ask of me of things that die...
I'll be the rose you hold and whisper why.  

Always Lisa Copyright 2003


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-08 04:56 PM


i'll be dayummm,,  this is a cute write...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

cynicsRus
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2 posted 2003-06-08 07:36 PM


Lisa,
My poetry friend and former partner in rhyme crime...So glad to see you. I always enjoy reading your posts

Sid

Always Lisa
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3 posted 2003-06-09 10:20 AM


Hopefully the change in venue will spark more creativity on this end. Thanks for the map my friend.

Always Lisa

Always Lisa
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4 posted 2003-06-09 10:23 AM


Cute is good. The dayummm part too. Thanks QjQ.

Regards,
Always Lisa

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