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vandana
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0 posted 2003-06-08 01:07 PM



We don't say goodbye
Do you know
How It feels
When we say goodbye
We don't say goodbye
Because It's hurts
Inside
We don't say goodbye

We only say words
That is all we can say
From heaven to love
That were sent to us
We don't say goodbye

No we don't
We only speak the words of love
We don't say goodbye
It wIll hurt us
One by one
Our tearsstarts to fall
It will hurt us
When we call
Upon this love

We don't say goodbye
We both have feelings
That we are longing
To touch by hands
The love was touched by you
We don't say goodbye

Let the day come
Bring us love
Because It gonna hurt us
If we are leaving
So let us not say goodbye



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2 posted 2003-06-08 01:36 PM


Yes..... wisdom here, though of course tears at parting are sometimes a very good thing.

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3 posted 2003-06-08 01:39 PM


Vandana, this is a very good thing....
don't say good-bye, because it may very
well not be over, yet.
Hugs to you, friend  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-08-2003 01:40 PM).]

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-06-08 02:25 PM


You are right ... better not say good bye .... but then tears of love and longing have a great charm!
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-06-09 01:18 PM


I like this very much, vandana... it's beautiful... poignant and touching. *S*
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6 posted 2003-06-10 09:21 AM


Lots of truth in this Vandana a very nice write!
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-10 09:26 AM


Beautiful vandana . . .
I never want to say goodbye . . .
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-06-10 09:29 AM


Lovely write Vandana...no one ever wants to say goodbye.
Maybe it isn't over yet.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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