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Love's Aftertaste
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Love's Aftertaste |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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I am old and I am tired I have loved, as well as any man can love another soul while he's alive; never enough, never in time, always to know like a mime to the blind the feelings are lost forever, forever in time. ©2003 by icebox |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
doubt that it's lost maybe temporarily hidden |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Agreed with Kacy, touching write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
never enough, never in time, always to know like a mime to the blind I like that~ I am reminded of a conversation I was having with my sister while speaking of my Father who was blind and engaged to woman many years ago. It was evident that he loved her dearly, then he goes on to ask, does she look any good! It's a fun memory to keep, and chuckle at the the irony of love. I so enjoy your poetry icebox~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-08-2003 12:50 PM).] |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
You've written my own thoughts here. Nice write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tired, yeah, I know what you mean |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lost, or do they in fact ferment like a fine wine to be tasted at a later date? Exellent - sure glad you are here to share your work. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Lost forever, and there forever.... Well written, oh past master of the motorscooter... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well, I am 40...I guess some might consider that old. I get tired too, Mr. Icebox, and there are days that I don't feel...but the feelings always return. That is what makes us living human beings. So, my dear, I believe that your feelings make be just sleeping and will awaken your spirit shortly.  Patricia Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write! I agree with Mysteria...those thoughts.. those feelings are still there...only getting better with age.. I know how you feel.  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Forgot to say.... I love your pic!!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love your picture too ... a true artist/poet look! To your feelings. I am sure this situation will change ... your heart will tell you! Very intense words I enjoyed. Love is always on time, if you surrender to it. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Feelings are lost and feelings are gained...James |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Midnitesun ~ Really? OK, I will keep looking for it. *smile* Thank you for reading my poem. Aenimal ~ Thank you, Sir. I appreciate it. BluesSerenade ~ That really made me laugh. He needed to build some image in his mind, or check your input with the one he had made already. It is really funny. Thank you for sharing that here. I am glad you enjoy my poetry; you are why I am here. *smile* Ishmael ~ Really? I hope you don't mind! I did not mean to take them from you. *grin* Thank you for reading this and for your comment. passing shadows ~ Yes, it is clear from your poetry that you do know. It is the deep tired that sleep does not fix. Thank you for reading and for taking time to comment. Mysteria ~ I don't know. Most of the time, it really feels lost. Thank you for reading this and for your comment; you make me feel welcome here. Ratleader ~ Yes, the memory of what is lost often is more sharp. Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. Patricia ~ You are 40? Why you are just a kid! *grin* It really is hard for me to reach my feelings. It is like they have automatic shut-down switches on them. Thank you for reading my poem and for taking time to comment. Enchantress ~ I am glad life offers you that. You like that picture? Well, thank you for telling me. There are almost no pictures of me; so there was not a lot of choice. The guy who took that one laughed at me and said all I needed was a cappuccino and a bicycle to complete the look. Thank you for reading my poem and for your comments. Margherita ~ Well, the future is always an unknown, but I am OK this also. I have known many feelings. You also like this picture? I think it is good that it is shrunk down so much that no scars show. *smile* Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. JamesMichael ~ You are correct. Life is constant renewal. Thank you! |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
icebox you got the touch |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
want a shot to wash that down with? Or just two asperin and a cal tomorrow to see if you have changed your mind? |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
gyiel marlok ~ I have been told I am touched before! *grin* Thank you for your time and your comment. Cpat Hair ~ Two shots of mezcal would do nicely thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox...to love is a blessing that can happen no matter how old you are...believe me, I know...I'm ancient! [This message has been edited by Martie (06-10-2003 09:20 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Martie ~ I will keep an open mind on this. *smile* |
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