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Open Poetry #26

The Time has Come

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-06-07 10:33 AM

I feel that the time has come
And everything has just begun
I feel I have to let go
Of something I never touched
Before it has even started
I’m torn away for good
Everything was going right
And now its all going wrong
The world was turning my way
For once in my life
Well it stopped turning today
It turned the other way
Time shifts everything I know
It changes all the people I care for
It changes faces
It changes their voice
It changes their lives
Their rights and their choices
I knew every one of my friends till today
And then everything just changed
I feel this way
Today
And today it will never change
Im stuck in the turning the churning is over
I cant move on and I cant stay
Yesterday was a different day
I feel that I knew you forever
I feel that I knew you for sure
But now its gone
Everything I had
Everything I knew
Is gone
I’ve gotta start over
Over Again.
I feelll this way
today
and today will never change
Im stuck in the turning the churning is over
I cant move and I cant stay
yesterday was a different day.
How can I feel
That this isn’t real
When it is all right here
I know that its true
But what happened to you
Always calm always collected
This isn’t what I expected

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

1 posted 2003-06-07 11:50 AM

good job, sar... you've captured the confusion completely. things'll get better though, if this is about your life right now...
they always do, don't they, as long as we keep fighting? anyway, good job, l enjoyed the poem...
keep writing.
laurie.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-08 08:05 AM

I agree with Laurie - you captured the confusion very well.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-08 01:17 PM

good write, I can relate

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