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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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She was the carolina sun laying languid on the beach-- she tanned evenly and turned revealing shell upon the shore... just the crust in waves of foam leaving her in your imprint she was the carolina sun and I was just a moon's caress grinning at the sky. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I wrote one called tea time...one time. I think I could use some tea...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm ready for a refill...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I shoulda known KJ would show up..... Tea Time....Karen....is this in your character...with your pinky curled just so? Nahhhh.... Like this, and your metaphors add nicely.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Who needs the sun when the moon is much more bewitching?! Love this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
the elements - are by far my favorite to read and write about . . . K - who was the sun? really . . . this is beautiful - a meeting of minds xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"she was the carolina sun and I was just a moon's caress..." I like this a lot. I do like your work...crust and all. *smile* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and Im grinning at you...and keeping this one...but then you knew that didnt ya   Im still imagining your voice ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygawd! I love this K! Into my library with ya! Love ya lady. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
I like this as well. Makes for a lovely mood. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write Karen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now wasn't that just the purtyist thing I bet I will read today? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... nothing compares to the moon's caress IMO ... Very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I love the sun on the beach.... as well as the moon's caress...... Is any tea left? Hugs  Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Beautiful. Yes, I am curious, too. Who is the carolina sun. Anyone I know?  Patricia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all SO much...I just woke up to find all this grace here, and it's a joy to know you enjoyed. If I follow ya'll home, will ya keep me?  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
shells I gathered from her imprint sand the sound of mirrors dancing on water I fit on ya smooth and gritty Carolina |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehe I figured . . . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OK...I don't often do this, but I'll explain this one. This was inspired by the memory of my late brother, who would sing "Going to Carolina In My Mind" to ME-- "Karen she's a silver sun just walk her way and watch her shine-- watch her watch the morning come..." So, She is the "me" he used to see in me. Sure do miss him. Thanks for reading, with hugs. |
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