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Open Poetry #26

Jonathan Edwards Or

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-06-08 03:05 AM

Sinners in the hands of a (preoccupied) God

God is reading a book
a deep
      involved book

eyes like sunlight and shade over the groundwords

then
a no-see-um

    only
God sees....Um

        (motion
corner of eye)

and his thumb like lightning
smears the Life
between the "l" and the "a"
of "large"

he turns his eyes back to ....
  but
this second "l"
he made in "llarge"

God wonders how
this "l" could have been made so casually
(caused)

and is bothered......

I murdered

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-06-08 03:08 AM

. . . squashed like an ant . . .

Geez to really see into that brain of yours Bri must be quite a sight

brilliant
they always are
xxoo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-06-08 03:38 AM

You are fascinating.

I love the way your mind takes an idea and splashes waves of color down the page.

YOU take me with you, everytime.

Thank you, m'love.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-08 03:40 AM

*wow*

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