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Unprepared |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
(Funer-unreal) They brought you home, little one A bittersweet thing because you could not stay You lie waiting, patiently For the final good-bye Outside my window I wondered why Us... Solemn faces friends good graces Going places In a row Surreal We arrived Were the sleeping slept Oblivious to our presence And yours My quiet little one So many preparations So many decisions So many tears So many prayers And still we were Unprepared For the reality Unprepared For how small Your bed Unprepared For the finality Uprepared, My steps faltered Grave. Sunkissed. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
What a terrifect write!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - tender is your write... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Sunkissed. This hurt.  Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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