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You Are There Here With Me
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You Are There Here With Me |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Photo By Jim Warren You are there here with me hearts so close forever to be Thoughts are here there with you in my minds eye a clear view Apart by distance together in love sent to each other by wings from above Though you are there so far away you are here with me always to stay I hear your voice here from there afar with love from there where you are From the wind whispering clear bringing you from there with me near Stars in sky way up above me are where you are for you to see So my dear Love just look around me with you will be found Though away from me so far apart together are we both close in heart So look around if we will do you will see me as I will see you As you are there here with me with love as ours this will always be repost, slightly revised [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-08-2003 02:34 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful is an understatement |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Dixie. I appreciate your reply. I think I must have posted this at the wrong time....so many others were reading and bumping that it got moved pages over here real quickly. Oh, well. That's okay with me.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I loved your title and the presentation of your heart! Such a pretty picture too. Hugs Ethel~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
But here I am, far away ... and found you, dear Ethel .... and up you go. This is so beautiful and peaceful and romantic ..... I just love it! Hugs! Margherita  ......hmmm and the clouds ..... I love to watch them and shape them with my mind's eye ... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like your ladder format....pretty on the page, and very effective in the writing. I've got to learn how to do those pictures.... Ratleader is far behind..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is such an accurate portrayal of your caring heart! Glad you liked my rictamter, for you addicted me to the form. Hugs Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was beautiful!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Stars in sky way up above me are where you are for you to see Climb the ladder to the stars so, he will find you between venus and mars. (sorry silly little rhyme here) This is wonderful, Ethel. You delight me every single time.  Patricia |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i cannot express how fabulous this post of poetry is,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely stunning...Your words capture the feeling that love can transend all distances....Magnificent... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely words and a beautiful presentation! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I remember this challenge! Very well done indeed. Love the way it should be even when apart. I thoroughly enjoyed this. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy you re-posted this as I remember this challenge some tie back and this is a gorgeous response to it! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Ethel, very creative write... We did a challenge once upon a time, and I used a very similar title...with a few twists, of course... was fun, as I am sure your own was as well... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ethel, it seems there are three poems combined into one. The right side, the left side and all together. What a wonderful poem from a talented and loving lady. Hugs, Marti |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yes I saw the same - this is quite amazing in itself . . . love the right side the best . . . amazing you are this breathes . . . xxoo |
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