Open Poetry #26 |
your side effects |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You... are a natural drug I cannot live without even though I know the good side effects may not last forever You... reside in each heartbeat rhythmically moving in love even as I feel the negative effects of your withdrawal You... come and go without warning even as I lay in wait wanting and hoping, often in vain. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is attachment here ... and a hint of sadness. Well, very well expressed. I do hope you will not wait too often in vain ...if the side effects persist, consider detachment .... Your love is strongly felt. Love, Margherita |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I LOVE this...I know how this feels...~hugs~ I love this very, very much and am going to write it down as the printer decided to quit, lol. Once again, I absolutely love this I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sweet, wistful, longing, everything that a good poem needs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadly beautiful |
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