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cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-06-07 07:06 PM

You
have opened windows
and doors
to the rooms hidden
within me
long vacant and i
am eternally new
with beauty that i
never knew could
exist
from beauty that i
never knew could
exist
in my world... You...
You kissed my eyes
and lips
and i could finally see
and i could finally speak.
i am alive again
for You...
in You...
as You.

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-06-07 07:28 PM

Very romantic and nicely presented.....
Eric

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-06-07 07:36 PM

I am sooo happy for YOU!!!

This was delightful!

Warm hugs, Sweet Cinnamon!
EA

crimson tear
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 76
Massachusetts

3 posted 2003-06-07 10:09 PM

Very good. I liked it. This is one style of poetry i cannot write. But you do it perfectly. kudos

Shane

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-06-07 10:25 PM

terrific,,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-07 10:32 PM

This is so romantic. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-08 04:28 AM

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-06-08 06:24 AM

Enjoyed...James

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2003-06-08 10:52 AM

I have know these feelings. Life can be grand.

Thank you for sharing this.

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