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Open Poetry #26

Insignificance

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-07 01:27 PM

They mock me,
in my pathetic endeavors
to become one with them.

Maybe on a day
when lightening rips open the sky
and we stand there together,
both helpless victims of our fate.

Today the sky is blank,
bland as unflavored milk.

They stand,
still and aloof,
in assembly lines
of cardboard cookie cut-outs,

And parallel the sunday drive,
of pointless cars and thoughts
on miles and miles of highway to nowhere.

Without expression or empathy,
they are both hypnotic and awakening
reminding me
of my insignificance.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-07-2003 08:04 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-07 01:31 PM

terrific write,,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-07 01:32 PM

Hello Michele!
your insignificance?
doubtful, very very doubtful that your presence could be called such
missed your edginess, your open door policy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-07 02:15 PM

gawd!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-07 05:01 PM

That's it keep em coming

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