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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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the moon ripples with my secrets sliding glistening silver into a foaming night sky I am alone remembering the young Earth hear my tale speak of it's beginning a slap at the immense silence a hum of the world's voice scattering in abyss I turn over in the cold ink of wisdom and ripple the moon |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri: what an old soul you are . . . I can Hear? this sweet silence amazing insight and God you know I saw this - you made me see this entire poem in my head brilliant xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I want so much for this to be a series... you are nature's voice and the spiritual metaphor astounds me. I want to hear the world through your words.  |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
This is exceptional work. Enjoyed the read of it. Ish |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a slap at the immense silence a hum of the world's voice scattering in abyss * stunning! I'm keeping this one Brian  wish I had penned this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this SO much, I just had to ask-- can I surf yer blowhole?   |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this needs to breathe . . . |
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