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The Music Within (Sonnet)
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The Music Within (Sonnet) |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
The Music Within I fear if I don't risk the game today I will be left in solemn reverie If in the morningI forget to play The many songs locked in my memory. Time and its wonder never seems to last Wreaking dark shadows where I once saw light I know I can't relive what has now past, But I will try to win the timeless fight. I need to hear the rhythm of my heart Express the hungry passion in my soul And give it wings and freedom to impart The stories that as yet remain untold. I don't want to depart this world today Encumbered with an unsung melody. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By ~ Madeleine Armstrong aka ~ Maggie ((~.~)) This is my very first attempt at a sonnet... I contacted Marge Tindal and she referred me to Denise who was a great help. Thanks! You gals are awesome! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i liked it,, very good!!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maggie it is so great to see you posting and you couldn't have two more talented ladies help you out. What a lovely job you did on this sonnet, it's beautiful. I know I can't relive what has now past, But I will try to win the timeless fight. A great message to all in these lines and full of hope. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-06-2003 09:04 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome job! wonderful!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MaggieMyDearLady~ And all this because I emailed you my first and probably last Sonnet !!! You amaze me dear poetess~ And ..... as Denise noted, it didn't take much at all .... the Sonnet was darned near perfect when she got it !  Thanks for trusting me to help~ I love ya' gal~ AND for those of you reading these replies - GO READ SOME BEAUTIFUL POETRY AT MAGGIE'S WEB SITE !!! http://www.geocities.com/flutterwings.geo/Poetryindex.html Nothing lovelier !!! Bless you, my friend~ This Sonnet is certainly a beauty !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I don't want to depart this world today Encumbered with an unsung melody Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh...so good. I know this feeling well. I have been away from my writing for so long. Now that I have found it again, I fear it will depart. So, I remind myself every day to sing it praises. Lovely sonnet!  Patricia |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Thank you dear poet friends for your generous comments on my sonnet. I've been away from PIP too long..... I'm going to have to start reading and commenting on all your wonderful works of art. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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