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In Mind's Garden
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In Mind's Garden |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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In Mind’s Garden On a retreat to her mind’s garden she go Where the summer flowers spring from snow, Where tall grasses act as a parent shield Of seedling’s beauty not yet be revealed. With mind of thought she labor and toil In effort to coax a bloom from the soil. With fervor she weed and prune her young. With patient await her verses be sprung. She faithfully travel the garden alone, Nourishing the seeds which she had sown. Cultivating blossoms by the sun and moon ‘Til offspring sing sweet a metered tune. With a mindful thought to her final line, A mature flower she pluck from the vine. [This message has been edited by Patricia (06-06-2003 02:20 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very interesting write, Patricia. You talk in "simple speak", in singular vernacular, and make me think of an uneducated speaker who knows only to bring beauty through her garden...I like this very much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia, this is soooo incredibly poetic! I enjoy your writing very much! It always speaks to me!  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
your words bring out a nice vision,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Basically same as Sunshine, but I pictured someone young, maybe a kid... cool piece.. jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
really cool write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nicely done..I like the singular... has an old fashioned feel to it. *s M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Patricia, really enjoyed this poem, tending the seeds of the mind to maturity, then to offer them as verse to we who enjoy the aroma and its beauty. Thanks for sharing, tack care my friend. Sincerely Rick |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She faithfully travel the garden alone, Nourishing the seeds which she had sown. Cultivating blossoms by the sun and moon ‘Til offspring sing sweet a metered tune. With a mindful thought to her final line, A mature flower she pluck from the vine. Patricia, this is beautiful. It felt as if I was skipping along in a beautiful garden as I read it. Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-07-2003 10:25 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love this stroll through the mind's garden and the reality garden of life, where things really do spring up, earth's bounty blooming then coming to maturity to re-seed and begin anew |
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