Open Poetry #26 |
To a Boy on the Block |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
along the bAy gulls carry back storybook pLaces to concrete dreamers, the sky drips rainbow haze on blAckboards of asphalt lawNs, he comes to her like he dId back then, with hands that clasp behind his back, a sargent peppers 60's chiLd, in sheepish grin and blOnde as sun, he brings her yellow dandelions, a girl's first flowers, from the sweetest boy she ever loVEd |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet. I really enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey! Oh, welcome back. All smiles...miss ya. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you dears, missed it here too much it's a cold world out there alone |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope Alan is appreciative of your love, and returns it in kind, very cute. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the message I am sure he will see... if it is love, then I hope it is good to you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
he brings her yellow dandelions, a girl's first flowers, from the sweetest boy she ever loVEd Michelle, you know that I love this hint of love and romance. And, here are some more dandelions for you, Lady..... Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very sweet.. Thank you for the smiles today. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ahhhh this is lovely Michele smiling this one made me feel warm . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-06-2003 04:42 PM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Welcome back....now restrain yourself so we can enjoy you for a long time to come! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, dear, i know |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks ethel, for the bouquet. i really love them........ i get roses from the hubby on occasions, but when he picks dandelions, i know he hears me........ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hurray~ This is great girlielocks~ You've captured loves intimacy so timidly. Gawd, how I've missed reading you! Now behave yourself, because it's not the same around here without you! I know it's hard, just try ok! Hugs Michele~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-06-2003 06:34 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Yes, a very sweet write.And you can see for yourself how many friends have missed you here. Jason |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks, blues and fellow bottlehead, (ssshh i won't tell if u don't) sorry we missed eachother, on the beach....... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a clever write, loved the caps |
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