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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-06 01:32 PM



along the bAy
gulls carry back storybook pLaces
to concrete dreamers,

the sky drips rainbow haze
on blAckboards of asphalt lawNs,

he comes to her
like he dId back then,
with hands that clasp behind his back,
a sargent peppers 60's chiLd,
in sheepish grin
and blOnde as sun,

he brings her yellow dandelions,

a girl's first flowers,
from the sweetest boy
she ever loVEd


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-06-06 01:33 PM


This is so sweet. I really enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-06-06 01:40 PM


Hey!

Oh, welcome back.
All smiles...miss ya. TD

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-06-06 01:47 PM


thank you dears, missed it here too much
it's a cold world out there alone

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4 posted 2003-06-06 02:08 PM


I hope Alan is appreciative of your love, and returns it in kind,  very cute.
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-06-06 03:16 PM


the message I am sure he will see...

if it is love, then I hope it is good to you.


garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-06-06 03:43 PM


he brings her yellow dandelions,

a girl's first flowers,
from the sweetest boy
she ever loVEd


Michelle, you know that I love this hint of love and romance. And, here are some more dandelions for you, Lady.....


Hugs    
Ethel

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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-06-06 03:48 PM


How very sweet..
Thank you for the smiles today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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8 posted 2003-06-06 04:25 PM


Ahhhh this is lovely Michele

smiling
this one made me feel warm . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-06-2003 04:42 PM).]

bklynboy
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9 posted 2003-06-06 04:33 PM


Welcome back....now restrain yourself so we can enjoy you for a long time to come!
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-06-06 04:38 PM


yes, dear, i know
inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2003-06-06 04:40 PM


thanks ethel, for the bouquet.
i really love them........
i get roses from the hubby on occasions, but when he picks dandelions, i know he hears me........

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
12 posted 2003-06-06 06:33 PM


Hurray~  This is great girlielocks~
You've captured loves intimacy so timidly.

Gawd, how I've missed reading you!
Now behave yourself, because it's not the same around here without you!  
I know it's hard, just try ok!     Hugs Michele~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-06-2003 06:34 PM).]

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
13 posted 2003-06-06 07:33 PM


Yes, a very sweet write.And you can see for yourself how many friends have missed you here.

Jason

inkedgoddess
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14 posted 2003-06-06 07:38 PM


thanks, blues and fellow bottlehead,
(ssshh i won't tell if u don't)
sorry we missed eachother, on the beach.......

passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-06-07 04:22 AM


a clever write, loved the caps
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