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Open Poetry #26

We Always Have Tonite

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-06-06 06:10 AM

slow music drifts
around us like
slow sailing ships
plentiful bliss
speaks of everything
we'll never miss
moment eternal
splendor
reveals
the real feel
the truth
you cant deny
the mood
your eyes unable
to lie
just say goodbye
fow now
fate has a funny way
of showing us around
when I get those chills
I feel you
thinking of me
tonite just dream
in your subconcious
you have me

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2003-06-06 06:51 AM

Wow it really expresses love-your a great writer!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-06-06 09:03 AM

dreamy write...."fate has a way of showing us around", that's my quote for the day, I like it!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-06-06 09:05 AM

"You have me." Loved this perfect finish....James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-06-07 08:21 PM

fate has a funny way
of showing us around
when I get those chills
I feel you
thinking of me
tonite just dream
in your subconcious
you have me

wishful thinking? i always wonder if im putting on my own spin or not.......nice comforting thoughts tho

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-08 04:27 AM

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

6 posted 2003-06-09 12:06 PM

hi this had some kinda chaotic Structure to is i like it

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2003-06-10 05:40 AM

Ah.... the darkness of it, deep and enveloping. rose.

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