Open Poetry #26 |
All I want is you |
brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
All I Want Is You You have special powers Awesome, beyond belief When I am down you look At me and give relief. Im sure you know of this You've seen it all before But if your gift was gone You I would still adore. It's this weird connection That gives my heart to you If i had a problem You would know what to do. So use this great power When you think you have to But it's not only that It's everything you do. The sound of your sweet voice Lingering in my mind Makes me wonder how you Can be so sweet and kind. Everything you can do Seems so perfect and right I want to be with you Forever, day and night. So I give you my heart You are the one I trust You have powers in you And use them if you must... ...But all I want is you. ~*~*brezee*~*~ ...this one was hard b/c every line has 6 syllables and i thought it was cool. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write, nicely done! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the whole package that binds us. Enjoyed, and *Welcome* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very nice, brezee NICE TO MEET YOU! Welcome to Passions |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
This is great, u did and awesome job. !*^Manth88^*! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow...James |
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