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Open Poetry #26

The Silent Voice

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-06-05 11:42 PM

What makes me the person that I am?
What makes me hate myself
in ways you'll never know?
I don't know what I want
And I don't know what to feel
I am scared to go on in this life
I don't want to hurt you
But I am afraid that I already have
Please forgive me
for all that I've been
And maybe one day
I'll realize who I truly am
But until that day
I'll struggle along in silence
Hoping and praying
that my world won't fall
to a self-inflicted end
And I finally begin to realize
that I mean something to someone
And that I need you
to help me get through this life
Because I don't have the strength
to face this world alone
Sara Connolly

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-06 12:10 PM

good thoughts written,, enjoyed...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

2 posted 2003-06-06 12:47 PM

wow you expressed yourself well, and I could relate to that too, b/c Ive went throught that, it gets better tho, keep writing, I look forward to reading more!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-06 04:17 AM

Sara, you're born alone and you die alone...good write here, I can feel it

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-07 02:12 PM

Sara:

I apologize for missing your entrance
Welcome to PIP!

ahh . . . I know this one well and trust me
through your strength somehow you get through it all -

but I can surely relate . . .

nice writing
xxoo

Selina
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

5 posted 2003-06-07 02:16 PM

Sara,
Wonderful, touching words. I know what you mean, as I have felt this too.
Haven't we all at some point?

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