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Pick Apart |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Pick apart my insides Make me feel alive Remove the parts I hide Can you listen now? Do you hear the screaming The tortune I endure Rip out my eyes, socket first So I can't see, anymore The worlds in a shade That I can't recognize Everything beyond my touch Everything covered in lies If I had a heart That could beat to care Would I look at you And say that I'd be there Would I? Do you know me? Sew my eyes shut So I no longer see In this hate it has brought This portrait made of me Trace the path inside of me Show me where I stand Take me to the endless halls Show me to the plain Show me for where I stand Cuz' I don't care anymore |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But it is wonderfully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, very sad, but i can relate |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I feel your pain in this piece. I hope you will choose to keep your eyes open...you just may see something beautiful today!  Patricia |
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