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My reason ...... repost from Open 23
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My reason ...... repost from Open 23 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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My Reason Something i may not say, The meaning takes spirited wings, And shall not let me speak. Existing alive, Tugs on every part of my mind, You stretch me. Blissfully weak at your souls command, I smile to heaven, As it passes through your eyes. Contentment, Fills every gap, Every melody you are, Every sense making thought. Visions of what i'd questioned, Are answered in your presence, I asked and recieved. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Visions of what i'd questioned, Are answered in your presence, I asked and recieved. then indeed... it is a presence to seek out... nice piece..and nice thoughts... I enjoyed |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A beautiful piece of poetry here Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm glad you did most deserving |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Blissfully weak at your souls command, I smile to heaven, As it passes through your eyes. aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh, heavenly.....so nice |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your most deserving heart shines with understanding in this gem and I hope now the reasons have become answers, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - enjoyed the reading of this, your words are excellent... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey gemmy: this is so inspiring . . . am glad you recieved an answer xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Gemma,  This is beautiful. I especially like this part. Contentment, Fills every gap, Every melody you are, Every sense making thought. Visions of what i'd questioned, Are answered in your presence, I asked and recieved. How sweet it is, huh?? Yeah, you know that I know!!! Now, Lady, I loved this love poem. I wish I could say it like this!! Heart hugs to the both of you  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh wow, thankyou for all these beautiful replies, so glad u like it. much love, gemma xxxxxxx |
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