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Koi Fish . . . . . . . . . (Rictameter)
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Koi Fish . . . . . . . . . (Rictameter) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~*~ Koi fish Reflect the rays, Of glorious rising sun, In pond of Japanese garden. Shimmering with oranges, reds, and gold, They swim through mirrors of bonsai, Blowing surface bubbles. Lazy day with Koi fish. ~*~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
koi are very pretty fish.. across the river at the casino, they have a pond full of them i love to go look at them,, you did this write very well... qjq Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ Thank you very much! I appreciate you saying so!  Warm hugs, EA |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Now this makes me want a Koi fish. I loved this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, there is something so beautiful about koi in a Japanese garden. There is such a place at Balboa Park in San Diego, CA and it's such a peaceful, relaxing spot. Loved this sister ... huggles, Marti |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Interesting style again, this fish is actually pretty damn cool and I liked the poem as a result |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Great poem. You work well with this form, plus I love fishies! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loner ~ That was a sweet reply, Dear Julie!--and may your wish for this fish come true! Loves and hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ That would be another lovlely place for you and I to while away a day together, Sweet Sis!  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Peter ~ Thank ya, kindly, PJM! Have a wonderful day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
eminor_angel ~ I appreciate you saying so! Thank you, ea! Fly free and happy, EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Linda, This is wonderful. You create such masterpieces in this poetic form!  Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ Glad you did! Thanx for dropping by! May your day be a great one! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia ~ Wow! Thank you VERY much! ~ May you reap many times over that which you sow! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love koi so much, just as I love sarassa comets, rainbow trout, and all kinds of fish! (kiss on cheek) Me and my mom worked together on our new pond two weeks ago, it is so gorgeous, we got all this flagstone and we encircled the hole for the pond with it, then we filled it up and put sparkling pebbles at the bottom and now we have 2 butterfly koi, 2 comets, and 2 regular koi in there! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ What a wonderful coincidence!--Or should I say it is wonderful synchronicity that I should write a poem on koi fish just after you made a fish pond with koi in it! Thank you so much for the picture! Now other readers who are not familiar with this beautiful fish, will know what they look like! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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