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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-05 02:19 PM



Connected

what is this power
that stirs me
earth molded
air flown
in liquid drip
and what wounded
clouds so deeply
that they shed
their pain so freely
in simple complication
moisture I can relate


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-06-05 02:38 PM


~sighing~ because I haven't thought of a good respnse yet, but do understand this feeling.

*s
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2 posted 2003-06-06 04:09 AM


it is the connection
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-06-06 07:59 PM


i cry with the clouds, and they cry with me, yes, so true
Startime55
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4 posted 2003-06-06 08:04 PM


Said perfectly...felt deeply...

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5 posted 2003-06-06 11:38 PM


helen,
I always love lessons taken from nature and this was a gentle one. Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2003-06-07 01:36 AM


I agree there is a connection.  Enjoyed this.
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7 posted 2003-06-07 02:04 AM


Considering I believe that our bodies are made of vibrations and can indeed be in tune with nature, I absolutely loved this and understood the connection fully.  However, sometimes the connection is not always happy is it?
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