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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-06-05 02:09 PM


I am letting the breezes blow through me
as I try to grasp onto my thoughts,
those words I wish to express
that hold back, fearing their intentions
to be misunderstood.


M

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1 posted 2003-06-05 02:11 PM

ah..the quandary of saying what you feel and being misunderstood or not saying anything. As long as their is no regret later by not having said the things inside, sometimes it is best not to say...on the other hand...one should be honest with how and what they feel,especially if it involves another.
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2 posted 2003-06-05 02:12 PM



I am really too tired to write, so I am just sitting here passing the time, thinking...
M

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3 posted 2003-06-05 02:15 PM

LOL... forgive me then for intruding...
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-06-05 02:18 PM

ok, ok, I guess I have to allow your intrusion...and I do agree about honesty, but I think you already knew that.


Guess what, I finally broke down and bought a cell phone...only used it once to even see if it worked (called Lori from outside her B&B) but otherwise have no one to call ;(
but am spending time experimenting with it.
M

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5 posted 2003-06-05 02:23 PM

Oh no..totally wrong of me to intrude...
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-06-05 02:24 PM

MY~~~~
what BIG teeth you have...
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7 posted 2003-06-05 02:25 PM

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nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-06-05 02:26 PM

well yes~

I was sort of hoping you were thinking kind of mature-like
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9 posted 2003-06-05 02:30 PM

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nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-06-05 02:35 PM

Those simpler times are mine in deed
I live them, breathe them, even feed
them into others who'd wish to share
and spend the time in showing care.

So simpler times one can have, adjust.
They're here with me, they're mine in trust...


* and that's the truth,
but woe is me,
there is no one
who wishes to be
held in my trust
of simpler times~~

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11 posted 2003-06-05 02:45 PM

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nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2003-06-05 02:49 PM

well I am playing off you, and I could always do that very well  

It's my own poetry thoughts of the past two days that are not ready to surface yet...

Besides, I haven't played with anyone for a very long time...

M

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13 posted 2003-06-05 02:53 PM

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nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2003-06-05 02:55 PM

yessiree and I promised Lori, I would be good and  "not tell all"

M
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15 posted 2003-06-05 03:05 PM

"I am letting the breezes blow through me"...
I love that line! You come up with so many of them that I should have a keepsake file of your unique expressions!

Warm hugs,
EA
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16 posted 2003-06-05 03:05 PM

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nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2003-06-05 03:08 PM

Such a sweet reply, EA
Thanks

hugs
M

C,
Well you will have to wait for her return before I can find out if she will "let me" innuendo our "happenings"


haaaa
M
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18 posted 2003-06-05 03:14 PM

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nakdthoughts
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19 posted 2003-06-05 03:16 PM

And what a feat it will be with you waiting and me trying to convince her...

pssst..are you on an elongated lunchbreak or "something"?
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20 posted 2003-06-05 03:25 PM

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nakdthoughts
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21 posted 2003-06-05 03:31 PM

That's Right

You poor soul
will have no choice
awaiting for the word.
Time needs patience
for the cure
for then it will be heard
and only then
when Blue okays
and allows me,
mine own flow.
Pity
that you've patience not
'til then
you shall not know~~~


M
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22 posted 2003-06-05 03:42 PM

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nakdthoughts
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23 posted 2003-06-05 03:45 PM

~sighing~

I lack some patience
but am getting better
at it all the time...
Sorry, though
I couldn't come up
with another rhyme...

M
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24 posted 2003-06-05 03:46 PM

ah...come here.... ((HUG))

is it nap time yet?
nakdthoughts
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25 posted 2003-06-05 03:48 PM

do YOU take naps????

I haven't taken once since I have found the internet...


M

*you do know, we are in the open...and taking up much space

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26 posted 2003-06-05 03:53 PM

LOL..ok..I'll go back and edit out all I have said and written..so we don't fill up the forum.... and then go away so you can think..as you said you were when this all started...


nakdthoughts
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27 posted 2003-06-05 03:59 PM

and then I will look foolish (more than usual) talking to myself...

Don't you dare


M


*shame on you Ron...oh well I have looked foolish before, so what is one more time...you will have others wondering now what you had posted...hmmm

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28 posted 2003-06-05 04:31 PM

LMAO... too late M... I done went and edited it all out....
nakdthoughts
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29 posted 2003-06-05 06:21 PM

Yeahhhh...I noticed that.
But I STILL REMEMBER what you wrote


M
SmartChick
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30 posted 2003-06-06 01:41 AM

Welcome back, my friend. I am sure you had a good time.
passing shadows
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31 posted 2003-06-06 04:14 AM

I say hold nothing back! Let 'er rip!
nakdthoughts
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32 posted 2003-06-08 05:50 PM

Can you believe that, Ron thought it cute to delete hishalf of the poems and responses ;leaving me like this....

;(

M
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