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Canon_D_111
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0 posted 2003-06-04 08:07 PM




Gallows Freedom


The day is finished…

If…

I could dream…
The unknown,
Claws indigo…

Wild unkempt soul
Harbors a gallows
Noose…swing…
Freedom…

If…

I could wish…
The day…finished…

If…

There was hope…

The unknown,
Claws indigo…

Abandon spirits
Destine to roam….
Swing…
A gallows freedom…

If…

I could wish…
Dreams to be…

WPWpoet 090102c.




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1 posted 2003-06-04 08:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Wow, such intense imagery fills this dear debut, sweet friend, may we all continue to cry freedom and hope we can rest somewhere outside the gallows, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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2 posted 2003-06-04 08:57 PM




Welcome to Passions !!
Enjoyed your first post.
Have fun here.
Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-06-04 09:08 PM


Enjoyed this much...jwesley
Canon_D_111
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4 posted 2003-06-04 09:31 PM


Thank you all very much...
It is nice to be here...

Canon_D_111
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5 posted 2003-06-04 09:32 PM


Thank you all very much...
It is nice to be here...

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-05 04:43 AM


nice write...welcome to passions!
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7 posted 2003-06-05 06:56 AM


Welcome to Passions, CD111...I hope you find many wonderful passionate dreams to follow in your time here.  We've many places for you to visit, so sit back, relax, have some popcorn, and enjoy your stay.

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8 posted 2003-06-05 01:42 PM


Welcome!

Hope you'll like hanging around.  

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