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Could This be Reality
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Could This be Reality |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Could This Be Reality How would you know What they truly feel If not having touched Are their feelings real Making you feel good Words can be kind Their direct intention Impressing your mind Suddenly being lifted In feelings of elation You allow them entry Fooled by infatuation How long could it last Their charming quality Do I truly know them Was this meant to be Words upon a screen Can be so misleading Challenges we face Careful when reading Open to persuasions Influenced so easily Always ask yourself Could this be reality Hope ©2003 |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well, your words here are reality to me. I understand this all too well. I question reality...been fooled once to often by words. I am looking for truth and I think you got to get past the words...go deeper--to the soul. Beautiful writing. -Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching Hope |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave here a spell that words wrap themselves around and bring to live....I hope words spin into reality and I hope your reality is as beautiful as your words. Magnificent, Hope |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope it is.....I love the flow of this!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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