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Open Poetry #26

Surfaced By Rain

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-06-04 05:33 PM

Consortium awash, that flourished at the center refuge
Too full, the burst of sentiments controlled, in sudden deluge
Opposing of the smile still lit, sent leaking as a pipe breaks
Out into the rain as undetected in the coursing that a storm takes

An injury to insult as a puddle of emotions flee their layer
Bleeding to the surface, washing down in sloped declare
Seeking to be found by purpose, seeking the absorbing space
Wandering in endless stream, a proper theme, in just the proper place

Leaving empty far below the storage so abundant of such room
Even empty to be damp in promises of dreams that longer loom
Not the pitter-patter of a gentle soaking sigh displayed
But the rain, in fully saturate and by the face betrayed

These tears collect, in cloud, and silver lining shroud
As breaths are gasped between the quakes, trembling aloud
A single attracts quantity and certainly to fall
Their mixture pouring for the sake, and sanity of all

Copyright Kkh 6/04/03

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-04 05:35 PM

An injury to insult as a puddle of emotions flee their layer
Bleeding to the surface, washing down in sloped declare
Seeking to be found by purpose, seeking the absorbing space
Wandering in endless stream, a proper theme, in just the proper place

cool lines.... enjoyed the whole..but especially these lines..

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-06-04 05:44 PM

Good writing. I enjoyed. Joyce

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-06-04 06:01 PM

TD,

Oh, you captured it! You know it...for the sanity of all...

This is superb work...beautifully written and expressed.

Patricia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-05 04:50 AM

wow....*wandering off into daydream*

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