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Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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0 posted 2003-06-04 05:28 PM

Roses
In my garden
Bring memories of you.
Pink and bright red and deep yellow
Remind me of my sweet loving fellow
Who brought roses in the winter
And roses fresh with dew.
For my birthday
Roses!

By Joyce 6/4/03

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-04 05:30 PM

This is so beautiful. Reminds me of my old friend Chris.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair

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2 posted 2003-06-04 05:30 PM

nice... and roses are such wonderful flowers... and it sounds as if your feller knew that...

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-06-04 05:31 PM

Joyce, I loved it! Was this truly your first attempt at writing a rictameter? The form was perfect and the content delightful!
---and btw, wishing you a very belated Happy Birthday! lol

Warm hugs and smiles,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-04-2003 06:19 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

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Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-06-04 05:38 PM

Thank you friends and dear Earth Angel, I practiced this a bit once before, but had to read these poems to remind myself how to do it. And he truly did bring me roses. Love, Joyce

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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5 posted 2003-06-04 06:07 PM

How lovely. Try you did, and you produced a beautiful bouquet of words.

Last night, I got a lesson in rictameters I think I shall never forget. Now I am in the poetry workshop...learning!

Patricia

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-04 06:15 PM

I knew it! Your poem had such a ring of authenticity and pure joy! I am happy for you to have had such a thoughtful man in your life! You deserved it, Dear Joyce!

Lovin' hugs, happy memories and wishes for more roses,
Linda

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Sunshine

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7 posted 2003-06-04 06:45 PM

Joyce, you may try Rictameters, or any other form of poetry, any time you want. We always appreciate what you bring to us through your lovely words...and thank you for the roses!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-06-05 12:26 PM

Joyce, this is an absolutley beautiful rictameter....just perfect. And written about my favorite flower...the rose. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your words. And here's a rose for you....

Thank you for this.

Hugs

Ethel

Joyce Johnson

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Posts 9912
Washington State

9 posted 2003-06-05 12:48 PM

Thank you dear friends and garysgirl I am sure I have that exact rose in my garden. Lovely. Joyce

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2003-06-05 01:18 AM

This is a beautiful rictameter.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2003-06-05 01:20 AM

Rosy write......nice stuff!

passing shadows
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displaced

12 posted 2003-06-05 02:25 AM

a beautiful write, well done!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2003-06-05 04:06 PM

Gee, you are so brave - I don't try anything new - so, thanks for the inspiration to go do it too! Beautiful as always Joyce.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2003-06-07 03:00 PM

JoyceMyFriend~
You KNOW how much I love roses of such a poetic hue~
BEAUTIFUL !

Perfection in your rictaROSEmeter and in your garden too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Selina
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since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

15 posted 2003-06-07 03:05 PM

This is a very pretty poem. I love roses, especially peach ones... but red ones are lovely too

"If it's true you never loved me, there's no deception as you cry..." --SDaws

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

16 posted 2003-06-07 04:26 PM

Well done Joyce. In my humble opinion, these are so hard to write and I have yet to master one. Congratulations!!!

Huggles, Marti

Mistletoe Angel

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17 posted 2003-06-07 05:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I've never written that many rictameters but believe they are a beautiful form of poetry and guess I just like to leave them to others as I always love to read them! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, red and yellow ones are my favorite, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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