Open Poetry #26 |
Nightfall Flight |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Come with me to a dark highway of night. Take my hand, come and we'll fly like owls at a great height. Over silver rivers reflected by moonlight. Over seas and oceans, nobody knows we're here they are dormant in dreams. We have all of the night to fly and see. Look... a black forrest full of sleeping ravens and crows and there...softly flowing streams. Silence save for the sound of nature, i dont want this feeling to end. This night i could live forever, this freezing snow smothered scene i could live for real not pretend. My heart races and exhileration overcomes my senses as i pass over coastal towns below me. But it all has to end and the beautiful morning shakes dreamers alive and i am no longer free..! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad but beautiful |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
you make a night flight tempting...I love owls, especially snow owls |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is a lovely write and takes the reader with you. i especially loved these lines. My heart races and exhileration overcomes my senses as i pass over coastal towns below me. But it all has to end and the beautiful morning shakes dreamers alive and i am no longer free..! hugs from june xxxxx |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rose: this is lovely - ahhh our dreams . . . if only sleep will one day become reality nice imagery xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the times when I have beautiful dreams...wish they all were beautiful...James |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
yes...my dreams bring worlds of reality...then back |
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