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A Love So Right
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A Love So Right |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~*~ Lying in your loving arms By shore on moonlit night Listening to the lapping waves Ours is a love so right I feel your breath upon my cheek As you hold me tenderly My body becomes electrified With your pleasuring of me Heart to heart with arms entwined We pledge to one another Your love for me and mine for you Shall not be torn asunder Lying in your loving arms By shore on moonlit night Listening to the lapping waves Ours is a love so right ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-04-2003 08:18 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Are you talking about Angels? LOL  |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I like this, the repat of the first stanza reinforces the pleasant love that you seem to try and paint. nice work |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
NIcely done... a pleasant read for this morning and a nice thought to start the day.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - m'mmmm, I like moonlit nights... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Linda.. Warm and sensual thoughts here..nice. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Yes, my dear sonneteer!--Angel love!  Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Peter ~ Thank you! That was my intention! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain ~ Thank you! Your "pleasant" response has given me a "nice" start to my day as well! Morning hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Oh, Bill! Everybody knows that you love moonlit nights! I think you invented them! Love & Moonlight, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ The words, "warm and sensual" have special meanings when they come from a poetess such as yourself! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ "Fabulous"?!?---Thank you very much!!! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Wonderfully written poem, Earth Angel! I'm new to the forum and I've already taken a liking to your writing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VBN ~ Why thank you, dear BallNut!--and welcome to Passions! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, we love those moonlit nights, too....they're real nice!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oooo... *melts into the ground* Everyone deserves a love so right! I love the repeating stanza. Very beautiful! Yours, Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Soothing love and romance on a moonlit night! Nothing finer .... Great write dear Linda. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ Oh, I bet you do love those moonlit nights with your huggy bear Gary! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vandana ~ Thank you! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Fading Away ~ "melts into the ground"--ooooo! I like that! It is soooo poetic! Thank you! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ "Love" & "Romance" are my middle names!--as well as for many other Pipsters--yourself included! Huggums, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beee-utiful...just beautiful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie, you are some chick! tehe I've always wanted to write that in a reply to you, and now I have! Thank you for the beautiful reply! Huggums, Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lying on a moonlit beach, engulfed by the foam of the pounding surf... It’s moments, like this... Very nice, Earth Angel, This POEM, was so right! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (06-04-2003 02:41 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Linda, this made me tear up because I dream so much of finding my angel and holding her hand and kissing her and making her feel special forever as she makes me feel special in my dreams! (kiss on cheek) Yay, here's special angel hugs for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Richy ~ "Lying on a moonlit beach, engulfed by the foam of the pounding surf"...that was lovely, dear Rich Man! Luvs 'n hugs & pounding surf, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ If I were younger--or you were older---no, I think I prefer "If I were younger"--and we lived closer, this "angel" would definitely love to hold hands with you as we walked along the beach and then had the most loving of all kisses imagineable! Loving hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, sensual, tender... I think I'm gonna pretend I wrote this one... okay with you? LOL Excellent work, angelic one. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ By all means, Dear One! Pretend away! Thank you for being your own sweet self! ~ May you soon be making your own wonderful memories of love & loving... Huggums, Linda |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Perfect love... Sounds wonderful! Beautifully written. Deb |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Ya did it again. Made my heart melt with the first stanza: "Lying in your loving arms By shore on moonlit night Listening to the lapping waves Ours is a love so right" Ending it that way as well...Just a wow is all I have. You truly are an amazing writer. It takes a touching poem like this to melt the way I did. I kind of did one of those "Awww slumping down into chair" type thing. Thank you for sharing this. I really liked it, in fact...It's being safely placed into my library so I can go back and melt again and again...and also remind me of my friend and I who are in love but are taking it slow because of past trouble's we've had with our relationship. This just makes it all the better. Exactly like him and I...Thank you! *wipes up the melted body off the floor* Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~ "Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Deb ~ Why thank you for saying so! With that kind of sweetness coming from you, I'd say your rose is in full bloom! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kirah ~ Golly gee, Kirah! Whenever my feathers need a little fluffing, I now know who to go see! lol Thank you, so much! Angel blessings, EA |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Hey, I only speak the truth. Peace.  Ha! I did it... "Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown. [This message has been edited by WindSong (06-19-2003 02:25 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kirah ~     Happy faces! |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
OK ok...Hold your horses! Just kidding. Hehe. Here's a good ole smile face just for you EA  tis funny...peace. "Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kirah, I love it!--and I'm so happy that you are having fun with the smilies! That puts a smilie on my face! lol    |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautifully written. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eloise ~ Thank you for the "beautiful" comment to my poem! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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