Open Poetry #26 |
Love Songs......Dancing.......The Moon.....(Rictameters) |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Photo From Pandoras Box Sigs ~~*~~ Love songs Of yours and mine Are so special to us We both love most kinds of music Though the ones we call our songs are love songs They have sweet and romantic words Soft music to dance to Slowly swaying Love songs ~~*~~ Dancing Very closely Slowly to soft music Flowing through the soft breeze of air We can feel the beats of each others hearts In perfect rhythm as we dance Holding each other tight Very romantic Dancing ~~*~~ The moon Shining o'er us As we dance on the beach The bright stars twinkle overhead As if in rhythm with the soft music Between the light of stars and moon We see each others eyes Sparkling brightly The moon ~~*~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-06-2003 12:48 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Good morning, we are happy today, a lovely write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - a very tender soft loving romantic write... BC |
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goodhrtd Junior Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 12 |
Beautiful and expressive. You are a true romantic! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Seymour...we are Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Bill. I'm glad that you thought so..... Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you Goodhrtd. I really appreciate that. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, love songs are my favorite too and I dream ever so much that I can have a girl I could sing these to and make her heart melt and cry happily in joy while dancing to the stars! (big hugggssssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, you are a true romantic and may your Romeo always come and sweep you off your feet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Noah. I always look forward to opening your reply. I know that you always have something really nice to say. I appreciate you, Noah. Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous!!!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good gravy that was just SO pretty!
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is lovely. romantic and heartlifting. hugs from june x |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I found myself swaying to the pictorial and the poem! This was a very touching post, Sweet Ethel! Huggums, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hi garysgirl (Lucky Gary) I read your lovely rictameters and got so exited about writing one I forgot to answer. Thanks for telling us about this form. Joyce |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ethel, Lady, you are sooooo good with the rictameter. Flow as smooth as silk! Incredible. I bow to you, Lady of Love Rictameters! Patricia |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
garysgirl...These are beautifully written. They are so tender and romantic. I love this form of verse. And, you erite so well in this genre' ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WOW!! I come back on line and see all of your sweet and encouraging replies. All of you are so nice. Words don't express just how much I appreciate all of you...... . . Glenn, thanks for thinking they are fabulous. . . Sharon, thank you Lady. I'm so glad that you liked them. . . June, thanks. I'm glad that you thought so. . . Linda, I know. If I knew how to put music just right on these, I would on this one. Thank you. . . Vandana, I'm glad that you loved it. Thank you. . . Julie, I'm glad that you thought it was beautiful. Thanks, Lady. . . Joyce, thank you. I'm glad that you got excited about writing a rictameter. LOL I'll go look for yours. I love to read them and write them...especially about Gary. . . Patricia, why thank you. I really appreciate the compliments. . . Ivy Rose, thank you . Your sweet words are very much appreciated. . . Well, my friends, I couldn't give you all smilies individually. So, these are for all of you........ Heart hugs to each one of you, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! you're on a roll! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, I'm glad that you like it. Hugs Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ethel Mae, painting beautiful pictures of your love, is something you are so good at. i could feel the sweet summer breeze you spoke of, and indeed all the love that was in 'the air' ! i can't wait to have some evenings just like that with my rhys. We're lucky to have love aren't we, and you are never forgetting that are you? you're amazing. I love your celebrations of love in your poetry friend, you know what's important, and that shows in any style of poetry you choose to take on. much love to you, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma, my friend It's so good every time I see you here. I always know that you will have said something in your reply that's very sweet and nice. You are a real encouragement to me, friend. Gemma, yes, we are very lucky to have love in our lives. There are so many people in the world who would love to have what you and I have with our Honey's. And yes, you and I do know what important in life. Don't we? Take care, my friend, and I hope to see you again soon. Heart hugs to you Ethel Mae |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel: I do believe you have written three different stories here that meld into one It is beautiful . . . and I do believe - I've had it - seen it felt it touched it and lived it and will again - you inspire me with your words always do xxoo |
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Selina Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 62Philadelphia, PA, USA |
Very romantic, reminds me of me and my husband |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
MAGNIFICENT ROMANCE at its very best... |
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