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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-06-03 10:39 PM



killing a fly...

immaculate
   as a storm

(whiskers on the boy)
               and he stays awake

Pigman and the Lioness...
       haven't you stayed your welcome?

                   what is it to burn?
a reprieve of degrees
    rejoicing in sheer
                nervedancing

you hover over my trust
searching for humour's
                        final
resting place

(standing still)
waiting for the dark
to fall

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-06-03 10:45 PM


thoughts in dark
               was I right to think
           at all?

footsteps come
                     hide my face
dark will not preserve.

~*~

Ok...I don't know where that came from...let's just say...

you InspirE?

brian sites
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2 posted 2003-06-03 10:47 PM


ok......cool
smile
thank you Kari

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-06-03 11:01 PM


heh...at least I was FIRST for a change...

you do inspire...

more than you know.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-04 04:35 AM


yes, you do
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2003-06-04 06:45 PM


Where are you? geeeeeeeeez....

I've been waiting for you to ask ya something too...

This is just so extraordinarily surreal with its imagery, but I HAVETA know, what is this:

"Pigman and the Lioness..."

in reference or alluding to?

PUH-LE-HE-EASE...

whining and pouting here.

It'd kinda driving me nuts. (like you)

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-06-05 05:42 AM


Thank you Bri, for clearing that up.

sigh.

I feel so much better now.

(don't you?)




ethome
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7 posted 2003-06-05 06:13 AM


"you hover over my trust
searching for humour's
                        final
resting place"

I wish I understood that but I think it's really neat all the same!

Ishmael
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8 posted 2003-06-05 10:10 AM


Very interesting collection of images...

I much liked the loose weave

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