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Music Of The Pipe Dream
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Music Of The Pipe Dream |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Elongated notes…drawn out intent on serious sigh A major in the key of be…breathy in accord held high Yet sweet as summer, for every one born of the spring Imaginations troubadour, set free a fantasy to sing And fife and flute become the quarter note A minor consolation in the ever-falling anecdote Yet sung by heart to fullest of the lungs expanse With luster in the falling on the ear, a muses dance And sung with true conviction, and seen through blinded eye When found an apparition, to the self an open lie Yet partly to be truthful, and partly thus enchants For often dreams become the very real circumstance Copyright Kkh 6/3/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
They can become, can't they? I hope that all of your dreams do just that. Singing tonite, Lady of the Golden Tongue and Pen! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write,, i liked the ending.... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
They can become real sometimes. This is something that only a poet at heart could write.. "And fife and flute become the quarter note A minor consolation in the ever-falling anecdote Yet sung by heart to fullest of the lungs expanse With luster in the falling on the ear, a muses dance" Nicely done indeed. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! well done! you are just getting better and better! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - and often dreams do become real circumstance... BC |
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