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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
0 posted 2003-06-03 07:29 AM

all those moments
caught on tape
imposter me
bending down
to pick the string
swearing
it...was gold.
all those memories
of me
the pictures
other people have
all the things I used to be
my eyes were looking
straight
ahead
and shadows
played my
"used to be"
and my pupil
lasered life.

Looking forward into...this.
Dancing in these words of you...
© Copyright 2003 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-06-03 08:55 AM

I always wonder why it is that no one saw through the role I played...maybe they didn't want to...

I loved this.

Susan C.
Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-06-03 08:56 AM


Keeping this...
so when my foot heals?
I can dance
in these words
of you...
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-06-03 09:26 AM

"Looking forward into...this.
Dancing in these words of you..."

Beautiful..beautiful words here..
Dang I want to write like this!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
4 posted 2003-06-03 10:13 AM

the pictures
other people have
all the things I used to be
my eyes were looking
straight
ahead
and shadows
played my
"used to be"


Yes, I agree with my sister Enchantress...if only I could write like this. Karen you are amazing. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson
brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
5 posted 2003-06-03 09:31 PM

yes you are.....

at the future


this is sweet
quatro
Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
6 posted 2003-06-04 01:46 AM

...ditto....

This is so true.

quatro
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2003-06-04 01:48 AM

YOU GO, GIRL!
chinesestone
Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76
China
8 posted 2003-06-04 02:06 AM

a good poem
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2003-06-04 06:50 AM

serenity blaze - you write with so much depth...

BC
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since 2001-03-07
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British Columbia, Canada
10 posted 2003-06-05 07:21 PM

And here's to the future sweet Serenity.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
11 posted 2003-06-05 08:07 PM

"and my pupil
lasered life."

  ^ only you can come up with these phrases...

I liked the postiveness of this poem


M
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