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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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0 posted 2003-06-03 01:09 AM


I look at you,
and I see no other.
You’re voice,
It soothes me when I am sad or mad.
Although,
I have made many wrong choices,
You guide me through,
What I call this life of mine
And pick me up when I fall,
You Carry me far,
when I cant carry on.
You kiss my face,
Like my father above would his son,
Jesus.
You fix my wings,
When they have broke and have fallen.
You, Heal my wounds,
When I’m cut very deep,
and hurt.
You’re my shield,
when others are cruel.
You’re the light in my sky,
In which I was blinded and could not see the
Glimpse of any soul in sight.
I cry every night,
Thinking of how much I love you.
And how much I Thank,
God for sending his most beautiful,
Angel ,
For a girl who has to live with many hurtful memories,
and life threatening scars.
All, I wish of this is to prove to you what you deserve.

Ashgiel

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1 posted 2003-06-03 01:12 AM


sounds as though you have found someone very special this is very sweet and thoughtful
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2 posted 2003-06-03 01:23 AM


What a beautiful tender thank you for someone who has been there for you, when you needed a friend. Very nicely written, Leighsa! Thank you for sharing this.
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3 posted 2003-06-03 02:40 AM


beautiful write
El_Campeador
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4 posted 2003-06-03 09:03 AM


"You fix my wings,
When they have broke and have fallen."

Beautiful. Keep flying, and thank God for friends who can help to fix your wings when you are down.

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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