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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Magma I fan the best of embers past To make them bright and last and last I add no fuel for they were born Of things were here and now are gone. Some winds will stir the embers bright To give the echoes former light And warm the cockles of my heart To things remembered in their start. Things that flowed in beauties show Things that fell like newborn snow Things that blossomed like a flower Things that gave me living power Embers glow my memory place Fading fireflies making lace Wine and roses form the bind Those that come to seek my mind It is the fire of my abode The magma of eruptions mode |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A warm fire... a forever fire... and now I've read two Sy delights... my day be warmed into my night... Good morning hugs, Sy! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dear Soneteer! Both you and your wonderful poetry, fan the the fires of inspire within me! This write was extra-special! Sending you some angel breath to help keep your home fires burning... Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Embers glow my memory place Fading fireflies making lace Wine and roses form the bind Those that come to seek my mind Seymour - a glorious write this fine Saturday. Since it is my birthday, might I suggest a beautifully iced piece of cake with our tea? Yummy!! Enchantress....tea please. hugs for this fine read. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! May I just say you warm the cockles of my heart! Yes, have some of my sister's birthday cake with tea this ayem. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Embers glow my memory place' And fortunately for us, you share it in beautiful poetry that constantly begs to be read aloud ! Thanking you, I am~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"Fading firelies making lace" Oh my goodness..what imagery...smiling here, I like that a lot...as I do the entire poem. Enjoyed, hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some winds will stir the embers bright To give the echoes former light And warm the cockles of my heart To things remembered in their start. Things that flowed in beauties show Things that fell like newborn snow Things that blossomed like a flower Things that gave me living power Embers glow my memory place Fading fireflies making lace Wine and roses form the bind Those that come to seek my mind It is the fire of my abode The magma of eruptions mode ============================= and it tis what gives Randy his roar ... and Stinky his winkies  *L*Some winds will stir the embers bright To give the echoes former light Embers glow my memory place Fading fireflies making lace and could those lines be any cooler??? the depth of their meaning personified, just make me smile across the miles at you.  Wine and roses form the bind yeppers..its official... youre the raspberry spree in me poetry.    |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I loved this...as I always love your work! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, enjoyed the style and soft content of your works. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
NO, I didn't read this one before I wrote mine..... Maybe I should have.... Well done Sy... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I love the metaphor! perfect perfect perfect I will always think of memories as embers burning waiting for winds of change to make them glow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful poets that commented on this poem I thank you. I'm still having trouble with my soft wear, keep getting lines and double writing not sure what to do, but I'll try something. Thank you again Sy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And where do we go when the volcano erupts like Jimmy Buffett sings? Why go anywhere, let the embers shower all around you! (big hugggsssssss) Well enjoyed this, and fear not, you will find a solution, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You are very understanding, thank you. |
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