Open Poetry #26 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
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Let me see your eyes at the start of day. let me wake at your side and see your beautiful face,lord i pray. Let me always feel your touch, through day and night. Let me breathe your fragrant skin, that fills my heart with delight. et me hear your whisper and voice,as i hold you close to me.let me taste your lips, feel your sensuous softness, that sets my heart free..! Precious heart ive loved you from the start, little by little, i die each day we are apart. Winter comes and the ice and snow outside are melted by my love. melting the carpet of white, white as a dove. my solitude is only broken by thaughts of you, alone i travel by book to distant lands, across seas of blue. The dark forrests of my mind are troubled by hiding things, in a jungle full of evil, razor sharp plants and insect stings. At the end of it, you, like a beacon shine, show me the way, guide me to your love so sublime..! |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
If ever I have felt love it came from this poem. So close to my heart your words are and they remind me so much of the feelings I feel for another. Thank you for setting my heart free. New Member, yv |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Love just happens to be my favorite topic..and you express it well! Beautiful piece..enjoyed evey word! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This one is my favorite of yours, I had to come back and read it again....so beautiful, lovely,..blessed she is that she has your words of love so deeply expressed,whoever she is, she is lucky ![]() Let me breathe your fragrant skin, that fills my heart with delight...write more. more love poetry...please ![]() [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-12-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice Rose - I miss mine too . . . xxoo |
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