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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2003-06-02 10:40 AM

Clouds pass over head

Mother nature pours a sigh

Breathe the pure fresh air

Cpat Hair

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1 posted 2003-06-02 10:43 AM

Mother nature today..pours rain. We need it so I can't complain.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-02 10:51 AM

Ron, good morning.
LOL, we need it too, and got a full dose yesterday, that shut down Highway I70 both directions in and out of Vail, CO with a major sinkhole....I always called them stinkholes when I lived in Florida.
LOL, my reply is longer than my poetry.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-02 01:08 PM

great!

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-06-02 01:34 PM

A perfect cup of fresh air. Really liked this. TD

bslicker

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state of mind

5 posted 2003-06-02 02:08 PM

yep midnitesun
the florida rains can be that way also.
cleans the air fresh to breath again.
good one

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (06-02-2003 02:09 PM).]

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-02 03:33 PM

"Mother nature pours a sigh"---how poetic!

Huggums,
EA

Midnitesun

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Gaia

7 posted 2003-06-02 03:48 PM

THANKS for reading!
refreshing raindrops to all

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-06-02 04:09 PM

Excellent Kacy!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

icebox
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in the shadows

9 posted 2003-06-02 04:39 PM

This poem is such a breath of fresh air here in the dusty old poetry room! *grin*

Where I live, if you can't smell it or taste it, then it isn't really air. *laugh*

garysgirl

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10 posted 2003-06-02 09:42 PM

This truly is a breath
of fresh air, Kacy. I love it.

Hugs

Ethel

whiskey

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11 posted 2003-06-02 09:47 PM

The best fresh air is out in the country where there is no pollution its great to go camping and breath it all in, the smell of the trees and nature is wonderful. Great write

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

Edder
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12 posted 2003-06-02 09:55 PM

well done. ~inhaling deeply~

Duncan
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13 posted 2003-06-02 10:13 PM

I wish! I'm presently surrounded by newly fertilized fields. Fresh air seems to be an acquired taste!!

SEA

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with you

14 posted 2003-06-02 10:52 PM

makes me want to take a deep breath!

very nicely done

Midnitesun

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Gaia

15 posted 2003-06-03 12:46 PM

Thanks for all your fresh air replies!
I got caught in a rainstorm a few days ago at an inconvenient moment, and after cussing out the rainclouds, I remembered how clean the trees and air felt afterwards, and ended up thanking the cloudburst.

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