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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
As the bells fade to silence The winds glide in unison To brush the tears away As betrayal signs its mark A heart, the puppet Misconception to its whole Incomplete and now burned Eternal resting in confinement Never hear the whispers ending That lines itself to pain As it's everlasting whimper That twists within my smile The endless times that seem To break down at a fault A mimic to the other And a relic to myself Reliance has dimmed to nothing Pity reached out its wings To bury me in shadows holding Now locked in whispers flow No one to hear me, anymore |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I really enjoyed this.An excellent write. ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
amazing lines here: Pity reached out its wings To bury me in shadows holding nice job Moments . . . xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some wonderful lines, LM... enjoyed this very much! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kind of sad, but I enjoyed it |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The endless times that seem To break down at a fault A mimic to the other And a relic to myself This verse is like a single tear that falls alone. Sadly, this, and heartfelt~ |
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