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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2003-06-01 02:48 PM

Yet again, another revised oldie...

Nothing

No cleansing tears,
no laughter bliss,
no soothing touch,
no kindred kiss.
In peace, release
I cannot find,
no rippled pond
to still my mind.

Darkness quenches
it's thirst in taunt,
no angel arms
to hold in haunt.
Regretful past,
unraveled fray,
in weep of woe
my dreams decay.

Undesired moth
and nothing more,
my bones, they break
upon the shore.
I am flea
of destiny,
a worthless void
in misery.

Another dawn
blackened day,
all hope I have
fades away.
Sky of scream -
wingless bird,
no Godly ear,
prayers unheard.

No pistol raping flesh of head,
there is no point, my soul is dead.

By Melissa Long-Monette

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-01 02:49 PM

No pistol raping flesh of head,
there is no point, my soul is dead

loved the closeing on this very well done,,,

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

2 posted 2003-06-01 03:03 PM

Amazing! You really have a way with words. It's so deep!

Loved it!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-06-01 03:28 PM

God God in Heaven
I want to come and get you Melissa . . .

This is powerful missy
but geez I feel like this so often
I despise these feelings - dont you?
Yes yes you do . . .

Trust me - there is always an angel awaiting
even if you dont feel it
this one slapped me in the face today
but I like when they do that
the punches are the best to read

amazing writing again
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-01-2003 03:30 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-07 05:35 PM

Argh..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-06-07 05:53 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) I certainly hope you aren't really feeling worthless recently, dearest friend, your poetry is very poignant and I only hope it is poetry and nothing more as moths embrace the light in all circumstances! (big hugggssssssss) You are something far more, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-08 04:50 AM

dang, this hurt

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2003-06-08 09:54 AM

Dear honeybee, this touches so many parts of my heart, we all write of so much pain; so many must feel it, but many have no avenue to take, but to further cry and die inside. Your soul is there and there are many paths; I hope you find the one to happiness soon, take care my friend.
I enjoyed this read, thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

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