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One Day (dedicated to ThunderMage)
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One Day (dedicated to ThunderMage) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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One day We will be happy And together For the rest of our lives One day We will not Always have to worry About when we will Talk again One day In the near future We will tell our sons and daughters Of how we met And the love we created together One day We will see our children Fall in love and marry As one day we will do In the future One day We will be old and grey together Holding hands as we sit In our rocking chairs at sunset Rocking and talking about How our lives were well spent One day.... One day.... All this will be sure to happen Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (06-01-2003 10:12 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sweet Julie, I like this poem. Especially this part.... One day We will be old and grey together Holding hands as we sit In our rocking chairs at sunset Rocking and talking about How our lives were well spent One day.... One day.... All this will be sure to happen Yes, we have to always keep the faith.  Hugs to both of you  Ethel |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this  "One day In the near future We will tell our sons and daughters Of how we met And the love we created together" that is great....it's fun to tell that story, it's even better when the kids ask to hear it I hope you get to tell your "future" kids a really romantic story |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful perspective! Much love, Margherita |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It's all totally true Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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