Open Poetry #26 |
Negev Desert Love Moment |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
On the heated sands of the Negev desert, I stood silently close to you, head lifted tentatively to receive the touch of your hand offered in a sensual gentleness I’d never known before, and sadly, have not experienced since. Pushing aside a sheerest face veil intended to protect my fairness from scorching slaps of the fiery desert sun, you exposed much more than my pale visage. Your thoughtful gaze from soft brown eyes made me feel the inner warmth of a mind and soul who saw past my fragile defensive outer layers as if they were transparencies, revealing a soul that yearned for the fires of pure passionate love. My heart beat erratically with Eros thoughts, nearly bursting from its holding place in wanton anticipation. But we were not destined to be, you and me, although I knew in my heart you wanted me as I wanted you. And the heat of that moment remains within the core of me, even as I feel the coldness of distance and time encircling my body. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-18-2003 09:42 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< forward to reading more! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Unrequited passion can often leave an indelible mark on one's mind--and on one's heart. Your descriptive words were so romantic and full of wistful, yet bittersweet, longing. Love & Light, Linda |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Kacy - this is brilliant! OUCH But we were not destined to be, you and me, although I knew in my heart you wanted me as I wanted you. xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, friends for taking a moment to read and reply. Yes, it's amazing how the memory of one touch can stay with you forever. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky sensual...you have captured some soft moments...james |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
James, thanks. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I think you just redefined moment poetry Kacy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kacy this is very beautiful. An enchanting moment that stretches into eternity. Truly yours forever. Maybe it is just enough in its perfection? Much enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks Vandana. Duncan, ya think so? Thanks for this moment. Margherita, I appreciated that reply. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy...I so enjoyed this... thank you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Then I'm glad to have shared this memory moment with you, Karilea Sunshine. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - it seems that there is always one that stays in the mind that's special... BC |
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