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Open Poetry #26

Taken Into Meadow

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-05-31 11:04 PM

Slippered footsteps by your side
Slight of hand, held palms allied
Into open field of dreams
Eye to eye in wildflower scenes

Here my darling is my heart
Blossoms swept in nature’s art
Inhibitions stripped away
Premonitions let to play

Lazy wind chimes, pastures bell
Drinking in each kiss a spell
Finely traveled suntan line
Each blossoms bed be said divine

Of the air each butterfly
Of your kiss a weightless sigh
Here my darling all I see
As this love awakes in me

Copyright Kkh 5/31/03

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-31 11:06 PM

This imagery is beautiful. My breath was taken away. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-05-31 11:12 PM

"Here my darling is my heart
Blossoms swept in nature’s art
Inhibitions stripped away
Premonitions let to play"

the flow of this is fantastic! and yes, the imagery is stunning....

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

3 posted 2003-05-31 11:24 PM

"Finely traveled suntan line"

Now that is an image that just builds upon itself. Great work.

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-01 02:18 AM

you took me there! wonderful imagery!

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