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Inhale, Insane
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Inhale, Insane |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
The product of insane America Lie by your Grandparents porch Torches burning, burn torching images in your mind Linger loftly and find yourself Like mirrors reflect emotions Wild and bewildered Strike a pose! -Insanity! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm not sure what exactly this is about, but I like this line "Torches burning, burn torching images in your mind" it's cool  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very interesting. But I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
If the world around you seems crazy, you would be insane not to act that way yourself. A good write, thank you for sharing it. |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
This poem says much in a consise manner. insanity is all these things...part of the fiber of our being.. (plus a bit of DNA) a poem for thinking!! good job kristy Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. [This message has been edited by apoetdreams (06-01-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
great title as well Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. [This message has been edited by apoetdreams (06-01-2003 12:54 AM).] |
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A2J Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 43South Africa |
interesting poem. i enjoyed it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This was an interesting poem that made me thinkl. That's a good thing.  "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Thank you everyone! |
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