»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Come Close
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Come Close |
|
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
|
~*~ Come close, Lay your head upon my chest... Can you feel it? Can you feel the tripping Of my broken heart? Listen, Be very, very still... Can you hear it? Can you hear what my heart Is trying to say? Hush now, Open up your soul... Can you sense it? Can you sense the lonliness In this empty heart of mine? ~*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Linda, this is very sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling and I send many angel hugs your way if you are feeling this way, as we are all your friends and you can trust us to lend shoulders and hugs your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sadness fills these beautiful words and has the reader feeling all your pain...My heart goes out to you... |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - yep, I sure do... BC |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Thank you for caring, Sweetums! I just had a flashback but I have grown and am my own person now! I am strong, independent and a survivor of a broken heart.  Lovya! EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Startime ~ Thank goodness those sad times are behind me! Your kind reply shows what a sensitive and caring human being that you truly are. Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Good morning, Dear Troubador! I'm not sad anymore. I blossomed into a beautiful butterfly and I fly free and happy now. No more sad face! I put that painful period of my life behind me! It's now onward and upward with a smile on this cherubic face!  Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You Go Girl!!!!! Fly free and high. I honestly believe that in order to stay free and strong, we must every now and then remember from whence we came. Hush now, Open up your soul... Six words of tremendous wisdom. Hugs sister, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti, dear sister friend, ~ I just out and out love you! Huggums, Linda |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...just beautiful how you express yourself! ~Smiles & hugs on this wonderful sunny Monday!~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ That was a lovely thing to say! Thank you! I have come so far from those very sad days. I rejoice in the new life that I have made for myself and realizing that not only am I a survivor, but I am a thriver! And yes, it is a glorious sunny Monday morning--and it matches my outlook on life! Huggums, Linda |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not many people can... but when you find someone who does, the loneliness is no more... and every moment of the wait is worth it. *S* I like this very much, EA! *S* |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! just touching! |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ Yes, indeed, you have wisdom far beyond your years! Huggums, EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Such a kind reply is all the more meaningful when it comes from the pen of someone who writes so poignantly on pains of the heart. Warm hugs, Linda |
||
|
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is so sad... but very touching!!! Neeraja |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel If you send your heart over I'll check it out.  |
||
|
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Cheer up! Very powerful and meaningful poem! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
||
|
sister3of4 Junior Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 16Northumberland, England |
I liked the simplicity of the words. Glad you're over your heartache! |
||
|
Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, Linda ... O, Linda. Yes!!! And close to the I want to always bee1!!! |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Neeraja ~ Those were really sad times. I am so glad that they are behind me now.  Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Are you saying that you want my heart?!? ~ you already have it!  --You are so sweet doctor T.!--but I'm all better now and I'm flying high in the sky! Huggums from a healed heart, Linda |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kellie ~ Thank you!--but I'm happy to report that I have fully recovered! Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sister ~ Welcome, Sis, to the family of Passionate people!--passionate about poetry!--reading and writing it! Thank goodness that difficult time in my life is behind me but those painful memories do pop up once in awhile. They serve to show me how far I've come! Warm, welcoming hugs, EA |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jaime ~ Yeppers! Thank you! Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
as always enjoyed |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vandana ~ That was nice of you to say so! Warm hugs, EA |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Linda - were you perchance listening to my heart? This is amazing . . . xxoo |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
littlewing ~ I love your enthusiastic replies---but in this case it saddens me that you can identify with this one about a broken heart. Special lovin' hugs, Linda |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
