Open Poetry #26 |
Love Is |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
"Love Is" Love is The sky So clear and Bright So blue Such a delight Love is The stars Shinning high Sparkling up Oh so bright Love is The moon So bold and white Gleaming light Down tonight Love is The trees Swaying gentle in the breeze And in winter time Loosing their leaves Love is The flowers With petals so bright Opening morn Closing at night Love is The rain Falling down The sound of the drops Hitting the ground Love is The sun Showing the day Giving us light Then fading away Love is The birds Flying so high Putting on a show For you and I Love is In what we see Love can be different From you and to me Love is Everything Thats dear to you hold Whatever it is Never let it go "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " [This message has been edited by whiskey (05-30-2003 08:44 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes there are so many sounds and touches and sights that bring love to us. I love the one of the rain ...especially since we have had so much lately. ~smiles M |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Masterful and true. Thank you for the insight on true love. When the youth of my generation see love as an adventure, your poem speaks to me and shows me love as an emotion, a feeling, life in and of itself. Simply put, I loved it. Hope to see more from you in the future. New Member, yv |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And I'm sure we all see love slightly different from one another but everything you said I agree with! (kiss on cheek) And may the bluebird of happiness always warble with love in your hearts birdhouse, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Yes, love is something to everyone and everything to someone! Nicely expressed! (I like your SIG!) Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow thats a lota love!! very good write!! It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes! I believe love encompasses all that is good. Very beautiful... Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are love-filled and share beautifully ..... I can imagine you singing this poem to your child. Much love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful metaphorical parallels....very nice indeed! The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is so beautiful. Yes, Love is all this. I loved the whole poem, but these ending verses were my favorite.... Love is In what we see Love can be different From you and to me Love is Everything Thats dear to you hold Whatever it is Never let it go Thanks for this, sweet Lady Hugs to you Ethel |
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