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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-04-18 04:49 PM

Down low slink
and guttural--
moan
into a scarf of silk
dark breasts heave--
the pain is etched--
quiver lip
and eyebrow sweat
hips in slide
glitter queen
crying there
her nudity
of the soul
screaming repose--
as if a note
could make things right.

Watch her hand
trembling
capturing
the notes in air
flutter down
mimicking
the agony
of simple beat
shivering
in ecstacy
and feet apart
with head in tilt
drool in drip
from one gold tooth--
and then that note
made things alright.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2003-04-18 05:37 PM

Reminds me of that thin distant column of light on an otherwise clouded sea.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-04-18 06:25 PM

and guttural--
moan
into a scarf of silk
dark breasts heave--
the pain is etched--
quiver lip
and eyebrow sweat
hips in slide
glitter queen
crying there
her nudity
of the soul
screaming repose--
as if a note
could make things right.

Sometime one note does... and sometimes.. it is a sour sound we hear, even though the music is sweet..

as usual... you show us how it is done... and as always..we appreciate it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-04-18 06:34 PM

Karen, gee whiz lady....this is like watching a movie while I read your words! The note....yes, the all too loving, note. "Rip it up!" I want to yell. Awesome write here. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2003-04-18 06:36 PM

enjoyed

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-04-18 06:43 PM

I can see her and hear her. What images you present in this lovely piece. Just beautiful.

-Patricia

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-04-18 07:49 PM

serenity blaze - you are awesome with your thoughts and words...

BC

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2003-04-18 11:53 PM

I wonder why that beat never stops. . .

always good to see you dear friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-04-19 06:11 AM

. . . I hear strings K . . .

Amazing as always - leaving me wishing it was . . . xxoo

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

9 posted 2003-04-19 07:16 AM

...Really nice...

I like it

Thanks for that..

Hugssss

Secretlife

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-04-19 07:48 AM

Patricia said "I can see her and hear her"...

aye...

and feel her.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

11 posted 2003-04-19 02:00 PM

DAAYUUM!

the essence....
captured

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-04-19 02:04 PM

~left stunned~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

13 posted 2003-04-20 09:00 PM

I was just remembering, this little lady who used to sing at this club I used to haunt, called "Uncle Blues"--a five foot powerhouse, she was--and? I wanted ya'll to see her too. Glad I was successful!

Even in the darkest life, there are some "keeper" memories...

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