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How Long Does A Broken Heart Last ...inspired by Nakdthoughts many poems |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I thought I'd done it all I was no stranger to a fall I gave my heart and lost a time or two when the flame of love went out I knew what it was about thought I'd be ready to start something new So, it was a cold surprise when the tears that filled my eyes were nothing like the ones I cried before and all the things that got me through and eased the pain I thought I knew didn't seem to be working anymore (chorus) Oh I don't know what to do to make things better I can't seem to find the strength I thought I'd have And I wonder if I'll feel this hurt forever how long does a broken heart last....... If indeed time is a saviour Maybe time will heal me later while I learn how to handle this great loss For the lesson that I've learned is the way the heart can turn into a refuge for the sadness love can cause (chorus) Oh I don't know what to do to make things better I can't seem to find the strength I thought I'd have And I wonder if I'll feel this hurt forever how long does a broken heart last....... The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE this.... even though it's sad, it's one everyone can relate to  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Eric... Lovely lyrics..wish I could hear the melody. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Sea...Always good to hear from you. I appreciate the read and the response. Nancy...thank you so much. I wrote this about 15 minutes ago so I'll be thinking about some music in the near future. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric, a soul filled write of lover's blues... Done nicely too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very beautiful song |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
How long does a broken heart last? Powerful question! To the broken hearted, it seems forever. As they heal, it appears almost over. When it's over, they realize that they permitted the other to have this crushing power over them. When they take the power back,they become strengthened! Excellently written! Thanks for sharing! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Take a deep breath; sometimes it lasts across lifetimes. Nice write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You know I don't really know you E, except through words, but I love you for this...because it is exactly how I feel. It's bad enough to lose the love of your life to another after so many years together(a lifetime of love and sharing) and then to try to trust again, when really so many your age carry so much hurt, that they can't give of themselves in the way you think they should. So you trust them and take them for their word, which is really "empty" and holds no promise of a tomorrow...and just takes up more of your time that is passing too quickly as is, and more of your heart until the only solution is to harden and try not to feel. My problem is I am a "feeling" person, and no matter how much I try, my heart remains soft...and so my words are a mixture of strength and then weakness, because I can't find my place right now, although I have been trying...when I know alone is not what I wish to be. I guess I am going to end this day in tears, once again.  M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Eric, this is so sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, that obviously is a rhetorical question but all I know is all things must pass and it surely is not forever and as we love again a whole new story is told! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
A broken heart lasts for ever. You just learn to deal with it, but the pain will always be there. Anyway exelent work E. Ben. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This will be a beautiful song. And the answer is forever. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Barry fot the blues word and the positive input, much appreciated! Hey Passing thanks for the read and the response. Hi Shirl I appreciate the philosophy and the input. Glad you liked this song and nice to meet you The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks once again Vandana for stopping in to read one of my song/poems. I hope things are fine in India for you. Icebox, I've heard many people say the very same thing but somehow I feel everyone is different. Maureen That is one of the most honest heartfelt replies that I have ever recieved since I started posting here at Passions. It's amazing how you get to know quite a bit about person just through thier words. Yours (words)have always elegantly carried your interpretation of the up and down changes of passion and hurt. You've never been able to write over the top of, or conceal your feelings very often, so, the result has been poems you've written from your heart about the truth and consequences of striving for true love which all too often can end up with aspirations being shattered and these poems, written with refined gracefulness have endeared your readers to you. Not just me but hundreds of readers can relate. I'm so glad you have such a friend in poetry and that you share that honesty and passion. When I can touch someone with my words as is indicated by your reply then it makes everything about writing worthwhile because that connection is what we are all striving to accomplish. When a man finally rests his soul on your heart and remains there until the infatuation of a new love turns into that mellow love of lasting friendship, then he's going to be one lucky man. So far you have only been exposed to compromise situations since you've lost the love of your life but I know of many that have found someone who really cares. Sometimes it takes a few tries and makes you wiser but happiness happens comes to those that never give up. I personally think that you have to realize that nothing is going to be the same as it was in the beginning and you have to start with a completely new outlook with an attitude for adjusting to everything a new life and love brings as a challenge........BUT, those open warm deep feelings you have are being sought by tender hearted men everywhere. I see it happen everyday. I can only wish you the best and earnestly encourage you not to consider your past as baggage you don't want to carry but as experience you want to share. I thank you for sharing as you have so many hundreds of times. Love to ya Eric Thank you Noah and I have a tendency to agree with you....There's always some romance left in life. Hi Ben....I can't agree completely. I think with the right attitude you can resolve the past and move on.....Life is so refreshing when one moves on.......Learning from the hurt isn't always a bad thing. Thanks for the reply. Catalinamoon Nice to hear from you again. I think you can get over a broken heart but I just don't know how long it takes....Thanks for the read and the response. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well Eric, A spectacular write and a wonderful thread. I do value the honesty and integrity represented here. And M you know you're the best in my eyes! I love a die hard romantic. Here's to you both...all the best.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know when I read this I wondered if you had sent it to Maureen as she "owned" this from the first stanza. You caught her heart and her loss so well. Eric, to gift someone something that validates their feelings and acknowledges their pain is probably one of the greatest gifts someone could ever give another. I too have read the pain she feels and this song is now hers thanks to you. I only wish I could hear it - if you do it, can you send me the link please? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard. It is even more special because it was written with the compassion and care of a very loving man. Like Sharon, I believe when someone gifts another person, especially one they see hurting, with a special gift like this it is priceless. A treasure that will be cherished by the receiver, I'm sure. I could tell that you really touched Maureen heart. Thank you for doing this for our friend. And, Maureen, a hug for you, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I not only knew the words, I heard the music. Hugs, TD |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Larry Thanks for the kind words and yes M is a sweetheart that can't be denied....I can't wish her enough future happiness. Sharon I can't thank you enough for those kind words and the understanding that goes with them. I certainly appreciate the input.... Regards Eric Ethel Thanks so much for echoing Sharon's words and for the kind words of your own...I thank you for the response, it means a lot to me. Hey TD Good to hear from you I wish I could hear you sing it because it might give me some good ideas. Thanks for the comment. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
ethome - my what an understanding, tender write. Thankyou for writing this. So many of us have had our hearts trampled on, wondering if they ever will heal. You know what? They can and do. But it is each heart on their own time. Very well done dear poet. Maureen....take heart dear lady. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (05-31-2003 10:42 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So much to say about this post. First? It is pure heart and soul, and a gift of gentle friendship and understanding. Secondly? I can't help but hear a timeless song in this, one that is bound to outlast the sorrows of many broken hearts. You are a absolutely wonderful and compassionate soul, and it's a great honor to be posting on the same site as you. And Maureen? Yes, you bleed pure heart and soul and love with every write, allowing your reader a moment to reflect on the sad side of romance, yet somehow remain hopeful. At least that's how I feel, even when enveloped within the sadness. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Once again, I can't thank you enough E, for your kind words and for all those who have responded. I think if I hadn't "found" the internet back when... I would have become a shell of myself. And even though my poems will be up some days and down others, it is the memories, almost all good, that flood me or events occurring that take me back in time...and bring out the sadness or wishfulness of those what ifs. And I know my life will never be the same again, that change is inevitable, and I am doing my best to accept and flourish in it. M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You have captured the pain so very well that I could feel it...Having been there myself I know the pain lasts a lifetime...I think that love doesn't have an on/off switch so when you do give your love it stays given no matter the pain losing it may cause....A new love can come into your life but you love them differently so the pain from the heartbreak of before will remain. I felt this song deeply and I too feel that it needs to be put to your talented music. Thank you for saying it so perfectly.**hug** |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Chris for the nice reply and the understanding insight. I appreciate your comments very much. Midnite It's always good to hear from you and I appreciate your in depth reply and your open warm heart. Hi again Maureen I know your life has changed but that doesn't mean it can't be enjoyable and well worth living......There is always so much to be thankful for when we stop and think about it. Glad you tuned back in and commented... Love to ya Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Startime Where have ya been there girl...great to hear from you....Maybe you should be asking me where I've been....Great to hear from you and love your timely comments!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...the understanding of your heart warms me, not just the poem, but your replies. Poetry brings people close because it very often expresses a turth that is not usually seen in an aquaintance. Thank you for this! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Martie Thanks you very much fot those kind words. It's true about the language of poetry it's a vehicle for expressing feelings of truth with compassion.....This has been a wonderful thread and I'm glad there was some response especially for Maureen....Thanks again Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent thoughts...yes, how long does a broken heart last...some longer than others...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric? I think you answered your own question without realizing it you did learn . . . you did For the lesson that I've learned is the way the heart can turn into a refuge for the sadness love can cause Sad as it may be the heart is a strong organ even though it feels like our weakest now - doesnt it? Withstands many attacks and here - you seem to be coming out on top Time - yes - grrr that time . . . amazing btw xxoo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James I think you're right some longer than others...thanks for the comments. Littlewing Thank you for the input and I guess I did answer the question somewhat. I appreciate the read and the response. |
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