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The darkness of truth
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The darkness of truth |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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garbled blackness fate transcends misery your best friend nothing's ever good enough what else is left of us stalking winding stair case steps dirtied from trampled flowers inevitable aching forever mistaking not truly knowing anything such a dark shade of sadness can't pretend can't defend my feelings the darkness of truth looms closely in my view reality stings sharply acceptance trudges on only knowing the welcoming light of mended wounds will always shine but now is the time, for sleep under a blanket of healing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate  |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
interesting |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sleep well then, under that healing blanket well done, Talia, another softly presented shade of dark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Talia: I know this well stair case steps dirtied from trampled flowers but you show your strength as well snuggle into that blanket and be good to you nice write xxoo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
dark and deep.you are a deep well of emotion.your depths are endless.write more dark material and maybe i will follow. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't help but to love this one...  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Great expressions of darkness, you take the reader trudging right through it with you, and then the ending provides hopeful possibilities of healing. I'm keeping this one, Talia... |
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